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Rear Guard
Content
- Written at the toughest trench line in the war, at one of the lowest points of the war (April 1917, Hindenburg line)
- A person moves through the trenches, trying to find headquarters. Asks someone lying down, but finds out this person’s dead. Description of dead body ensues. And the person walks on.
- Strange conflict: the discovery of the dead body doesn’t mean anything for trying to find HQ (that is it doesn’t change action) but it does change the way you feel
- It almost means the trenches are scarier than the war itself. It’s where death becomes domestic, just sitting there, inside the supposed safe area
Form
- Five stanzas of increasing numbers of lines: 3, 4, 5, 6, 7
- Gets slower and weightier, as if the person’s walking is getting harder and harder
Created on November 29, 2008 10:00:16
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